tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5561602331551364750.post8789086343248961220..comments2016-07-19T20:18:30.418-07:00Comments on Kara Harris: The Coincidence of a Love StoryAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00425646542885969611noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5561602331551364750.post-70121455025721024842016-07-11T11:45:52.888-07:002016-07-11T11:45:52.888-07:00I like how you started out with the warning in the...I like how you started out with the warning in the beginning. It was funny. I think you gave an accurate description of the book, however there were some small things I noticed that drew me away from the review. The first and second sentence both started with Lou’s name and somewhere near the end there’s a name spelled wrong. These are just minor errors, but you might want to consider fixing them and looking out for them in the future. I would also like to see more about the author’s writing style and some more opinion on how the book was written and not just what it was about.Amandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01360791451149585136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5561602331551364750.post-46381151890030457442016-07-11T09:07:50.375-07:002016-07-11T09:07:50.375-07:00I've already told you this, but when I first r...I've already told you this, but when I first read your review, I immediately ordered this book online. It provides me with everything I love in a novel–food, romance, drama, and a tint of despair. I can feel how much you admired this novel, and it definitely translated in your voice in the review. The pacing of your sentences kept me intrigued, and you also provided the reader with what worked and what did not (even though most of it did work for you). Possessing a strong voice is crucial, and I think you've found yours. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01386050635834322020noreply@blogger.com